sing me a love song
and i'll give you a reason
grant me an exucse
i'll give you religion
save me a candle
i'll offer you light
show me how to surrender
i'll teach you how to fight
give me a hand
i say i've got your back
colour me white
and i'll paint you black
write me a poem
i'll sing you a lullaby
if you teach me how to walk
i'll teach you how to flyi
i'll show you how to take
you teach me how to give
if i teach you how to die
will you show me how to live?
13 comments:
the last two lines are brilliant rupsha. the whole thing kinda evolves into the last two lines.
i agree with aarshi......realy liked the last two lines......the rests good too
i totally agree with rj
if you teach me how to walk i'll teach you how to fly
i like this a lot.gives a nice feeling.
why does everyone agree with aarshi?
not that its wrong or anything.
:)
because its better to say that you agree rather than say the same thing as your own.
it'll seem like you're a stupid brat otherwise.
oh..
Morpheus said - I will show you the door, but you have to walk through it yourself.
(or something to that effect)
this is almost exactly the opposite...
"Save me a candle
I'll offer you light"
y'know what I mean?
its all abt exchange...
in the words of brooke:
"there is nothin more to the world than friends with benefits"
though personally i dont agree.
"colour me white and ill paint you black.."
very nicely written..
i really like this post...
but why would we be *friends* with someone if we got nothing out of the relationship ?
no candle... no light...
so you go elsewhere
dark!
Really liked the poem, xiamaze.
this reads like the b.c comic strip show me thing.
me likes.
give me a hand
i say i've got your back
.................................i am really lowing this post
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